All Comments on 'Fixing Truck with My Little Niece'

I don't understand the trolls on here, I thought your story flowed quite well, and that's from a real English speaker not what you lot in our North American Colonies speak(written in jest, before you all go bonkers!). This is after all an amateur writers site and everyone should be encouraged!

You have an original storyline, sure your grammar could be better, so could mine. Keep it up.

Short and sweet, but Hot as hell!!!

A very arousing story, well done. I don't know why the language trolls come to this site, they should just critique a CNN news story.

A funny-sexy, thoroughly enjoyable story. Glad you're back. And please ignore the low IQ trolls who couldn't write a damn grocery list.

Tell us another story after they go in the house!

I loved it!

Your stories are Very Erotic...Erection Worthy...I might suggest one thing though...proof read your stories before submitting...but Please Continue To Share!

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Your stories all have a common theme, yet each manages to be unique in its own way and erotic in its own right. I thank you for each story you publish.

However, as others have mentioned, you have some grammar errors here and there. While the story is still readable with them, it does affect your storytelling a bit. If you would like, I can proofread it for you, free of charge of course.

let's be responsible......it's STUPID to cum in a teenagers pussy without a condom/pill...SOMETHING to prevent pregnancy.

I would ruin HER life as well as the MIDDLE-AGED man.

Keep writing and keep thinking as a responsible adult.

Thanks

very erotic, thank you

Thanks!

The storyline is good, but you definitely need an editor.

As a mechanic, that's how both of my nieces and a few of their girlfriends paid me for working on their cars while they were in college. The friends parents always got a bill so the girls got "reimbursed" spending money. Everytime I worked on my nieces cars, my sister would spend a weekend with me thanking me multiple times, and only getting out of bed to use the bathroom or to eat.

Great story!