All Comments on 'Flight Emergency'

Nice, heartwarming sort of story, not everybody's cup of tea I except but I enjoyed it.

I enjoyed it very much. Thanks

i think that there should be another chapter :) but thats just me!! :):D

Light and Lots of fun.

This story is good but... How did they meet? when did they ever have a dating relationship. They just skipped it? Owww I've slept with you once, known you for a week so let's get hitched? The kid just meets Julie once and she already wants her to be her mom? They just gain custody of the kid in a day that process takes a lot longer... It's a good story with lots going on if you would just slow down a bit this could be much more enjoyable for the reader.

But that seems to be your long siut so fair enough

It is a good start for a story let's see where it goes -

It is a nice story. I really enjoyed it but I do feel like you rushed things along a bit.

So he and the neighbor raise beef cattle?

The Australian Illawarra Shorthorn breed are dairy cattle.

Why are they buying fifty dairy calves for a beef operation?

The story is fun, but I did find it a bit rushed. worthy of 5 stars.

Twocrows, I don't know much about ag in Oz, but here in the states it isn't unusual to raise dairy for beef. Have to do something with the steers, so they get fattened out for butcher.

Your goal in writing seems to be to keep the stories short. The problem with doing that is the stories become too compressed. The reader is frequently left wonder why, how, and what happened.

however; the epilog and tornadoes are hovering in the background. TK U MLJ LV NV

but a little more background would have been nice.

Twocrows, it's not uncommon to raise dairy steers for beef. A friend of mine does it regularly.

"This flight 789 on route to Sydney, we have a medical emergency and have turned around...."

Nope. Short of some kind of emergency threatening the aircraft itself, a commercial aircraft would not make a radical course change without FIRST obtaining approval from ground control.