by MetaXerxes
So far so good . The only thing I don't like is the characters getting killed off .
Wow, i really loved this story. you have some great characters here and would be ashame if you didn't do at least one more chapter.
AT your age I can imagine several reasons for natural distractions from writing fiction, erotic or otherwise. With your fine imagination, I can believe you're charming the panties off all the girls ... of your choosing. But know you have a fan club here who continue to hope you return to the Sapphire Moon, and the lovely lady pedaling away ... with a smile and a glow.
WE DO APPRECIATE YOUR WRITING(S)