All Comments on 'Follow the Rules Ch. 02'

awesome! can't wait 2 c what happens in the next chapter!

slow, but very well done. i hope his not gonna make her pain him.lol. I`m having a little trouble picturing these two physically. what are they suppose to look like, not sure if you had previously described them.

I don't usually read noncon stories. But this story is very good. The plot is great and I hope u continue this story to its ending.

Please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Really nice job! Please continue. I also would like a better idea of what they look like though.

You nailed the neurotic notions perfectly. "Why are you here... Why didn't you come sooner... Want me, but don't frighten me... Will you leave me now?"

Excellent!

Im really enjoying this story! And love the fact that Rachel has become a bit of a dominatrix towards the end. I also love Zachary's character and how he interacts with Rachel.