All Comments on 'Follow the Rules Ch. 02'

by MidnightLove123

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MasterlillyMasterlillyalmost 11 years ago
Great Story! HOTT!

Im really enjoying this story! And love the fact that Rachel has become a bit of a dominatrix towards the end. I also love Zachary's character and how he interacts with Rachel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I am so impressed

You nailed the neurotic notions perfectly. "Why are you here... Why didn't you come sooner... Want me, but don't frighten me... Will you leave me now?"

Excellent!

SurprisingMyselfSurprisingMyselfalmost 13 years ago
Awesome.

Really nice job! Please continue. I also would like a better idea of what they look like though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Please continue! I can't wait for the next chapter.

ladygrey1255ladygrey1255almost 13 years ago
Well done!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't usually read noncon stories. But this story is very good. The plot is great and I hope u continue this story to its ending.

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 13 years ago
ummm

slow, but very well done. i hope his not gonna make her pain him.lol. I`m having a little trouble picturing these two physically. what are they suppose to look like, not sure if you had previously described them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
amazing

awesome! can't wait 2 c what happens in the next chapter!

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