All Comments on 'For a Friend'

The story is basically good, but the writing is so bad I had trouble reading it. Constant changes in verb tense, wrong verb tense, words left out, gave me a headache trying to make sense of it.

Please continue but try to relax, I do feel the story line is hot and sexy and makes me wish that I was going to be with Ashley .. ohh yes and with those guys ... which would fuck me first?

I had been used by the guys for a few years but I remember the first Kiss from a man I did not know. When he held me close and his lips met mine my world went all black and warm. I was in love for the first time. He actually wanted me. Not just my mouth or ass but me. I wanted to show him my love but he would not let me sink to my knees, He wanted to make me feel good and he said he needed to make me cum as he sank to his knees. 4yourpleasureiam