All Comments on 'For all You Cyberpunks'

I liked it! Good concept and enjoyed the desperate need

I'm an old-ish cyberpunk, I thoroughly enjoyed this. I'd be interested in a longer story in this world.

You’re setting up such an interesting story, only to rush the ending a bit in my opinion. The second part could’ve been a bit more detailed maybe :)

Some things I love:

How you set the tone at the very beginning with "we're just in it and bored."

The contract between when she mentions paying someone twenty credits an hour...and then the end.

The detail of how the hacker is afraid of the guard and runs even though it turns out the guard doesn't care.

The fact that the main character is trans!! (I'm trans so)

Anyway thanks for writing. You have a wonderful voice.