All Comments on 'For Sale'

Real good start but you must have been in a hurry to finish it.

The story had too much potential for such a week ending.

You are right, and now I feel horrible. That was a terrible ending. I really was in a hurry...probably to find my vibrator! I wrote that for a friend who happens to be looking for a house himself. Maybe I should finish it properly...maybe she should lock HIM in the soundproof room and keep him there as her sex slave. I'll have to think about it. Thanks for the comments.

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