All Comments on 'For the Love of Two Sisters Ch. 04'

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Grim537Grim537almost 8 years ago
Great Story!

I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loving this story

Great, got hooked. Now I got wait for for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Thank for the contiueatinion of the story

It keeps getting better and better. Can't wait to read more!!

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 8 years ago
Oh what a wicked web you are weaving!

So much passion...restrained..so far?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
hmmmmmmm

very well developed story with good buildup and flow. The language barrier is both a plus and minus. Makes for some very interesting moments. How milena reacts to her sisters teasing may make it even hotter. I suspect Juliana would go down on Milena in a heartbeat given the chance to share gene, but who knows?? Your story will tell the tale, and I expect in delicious detail. We await your next chapter(s). Hope he bought the right size of condoms. Hate for one to break at the right moment. Hmmmmm. GP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Enjoying this story even with the slow pace. Really hope juliana screwing her dead husband isnt a issue going forward with this tale only to create jealousy and drama. It was a turn off when it was brought up and i hope that you keep the possible drama to a minimum. What exactly did milena do to warrant what her sister and dead husband ended up doing behind her back? Didnt really need that plot twist.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Someone else voiced an opinion about Juliana screwing Milena's first husband behind her back being a problem. I agree that it will be a can of worms. Unless I missed something somewhere, Milena is still ignorant of the affair that Juliana had with Alberto. Even if the two sisters are currently in full consensus on sharing Gene totally and both being his lover, that previous affair is going to create HUGE problems because it's still a closely guarded secret. Not to mention that this sleeping around with her sister's man could be a kinky hang up that Juliana can't shake. It might be the monkey on her back.

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I see lots of trouble ahead....

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