All Comments on 'Forced Servitude Pt. 01'

by lrhustler

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice

Can't wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Grammar, please.

Story so far is compelling enough that I'm able to overlook the frequent verb tense and other grammatical errors. I hope this will improve as the story progresses.

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