by SimoneLisbon
The chapters are much too short. Not really cliffhangers so it seems more disjointed than a continuation when the next chapter comes about. Otherwise it would be a better read.
Loving this story but the chapter lengths are infuriatingly to short and because are so many takes time to get to the next for another short chapter only complaint maybe reading the story with all chapters in one place is an idea it’s a great story and I can see people giving up after chapter 8/9 because is the juice really worth the squeeze mentality lol