All Comments on 'Forgetful Maid'

please continue this story, it is good but needs more detail of her humiliation

You really need a proofreader. The errors make it difficult to follow and enjoy the story, which is a shame since it looked like it had some potential.

- JT

This story is amazing. I loved the way stuff was presented and then performed. I really appreciated that you never lost any precious time trying to create a distasteful picture of the protagonist, while almost every author here wants to describe a poor picture from lame pornstars they believe will help dealing with their lack of imagination (and consequently they demean readers’ capabilities to imagine). I also enjoyed the logic on which the story’s based; but I believe it’s a bit of a turn off when we could actually know what happened inside Helen’s head while she was under hypnosis; noneheless this was skillfully managed when she finally visits Roger. I’m pretty satisfied with your text. Thank you very much for your writing.

sorry...took too long to get anywhere.

Worst than a busload of horny teenagers!

Well that was a failure. It was a mess to start with. Why would a husband be upset that his wife stopped smoking do to hypnosis? And what miracle would have to happen that an untrained husband could whisper a phrase and control his wife when the original work took so long and was on a completely different subject? This whole mess was a complete waste of time. Unbelievable and poorly written.