All Comments on 'Forgiveness'

by BrattySub1018

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sorry hit the wrong star when I voted.

I didn't realize my clicking on a star would mean it was finally. I really meant to hit 5 but don't know how to undo. I loved this story so please know the 1 star was a mistake!

gentleone58gentleone58over 6 years ago
More Intense Tan She Had Experiened

When he came home he asked about his boy or son. Is she expecting in this story? He centered most of his punishment on her back or butt is that why? If she is expecting she would not have milk until a few days after the child is born unless they have another very young child already. It is an interesting story although more than she had experienced the way I read it but he also observed her.

BrattySub1018BrattySub1018over 6 years agoAuthor
Gentleone58

I actually am expecting... This is my first pregnancy and while no, I don't technically have milk, breasts begin creating fluid called colostrum early on in the pregnancy.... I was taken aback too! Lol thanks for your feedback... Thought that explanation would ruin the narrative flow

desjdesjabout 6 years ago

I love this story and care in it. It did make think of the baby while I read it cause kept thinking is any of that hurting with all the pushing into doors etc to her but was very good story and a good husband wish there was more

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