by manatdawnrise
No cross dressing or transexuals at all . Should have been in loving wives or a longer chapter to get to cd
At least have the decency to put a name to a critical comment.
I, for one, like the start of this and very much want to read more. From what I read, I think it is heading in a direction I'm going to enjoy. I was only perturbed when I saw that it's the only story you have written and that it was posted yesterday. Please, please, PLEASE write more soon!
Amber
For a first story BARF. Agree with the other comment. Wrong category
JHJ
Can't believe these idiots who complain. It's obvious what is coming, good job of teasing the reader. Don't worry if idiots don't get it.
This story isn't about a CD. If you are getting to it eventually then OK but this story was a bit lame. I hope chapter 2 is better.
She's a teasing wife so far. Nothing hinting at cross dressing yet. Wonder why the male chastity device for prior to clubbing? None the less I'm sure you've got some creative ideas in store for the next part. I was expecting the package to contain at least a pair of panties for him to put on in the loo. Anyway, anticipating the next installment of the story.
I would do the same thing, ya gotta trust your lover.
That he never finished this story it had great potential. Wish I had checked the dates before I started reading. I would’ve skipped.