All Comments on 'Fountain of Youth Ch. 03: Proof'

POS story, it took you a year and a half to write one page, and this is the best you could do? GTF outta here, 1 star, and that was a stretch.

I am not going to be as harsh as the other anonymous commenter, but I do agree the choking and slapping are not turn ons and if you feel the need to continue down that line maybe you should put the story in a different category in the future. I still enjoyed the story as a whole, but the parts mentioned seriously detracted from it.

I will say that this idea is an amazing one. But maybe you could've saved the rough play for later? Also, if you updated more I'm certain you'd get love. The idea is great but the delivery isn't as good as you show it can be.

I've been waiting years for you to continue this story. I for one loved this chapter! Ignore all the negative comments, they're not constructive, just people being overly critical on the internet as usual. I liked the little bit of choke-play, and the whole concept of the story is hot! Just keep doing what you're doing, I'm looking forward to reading more!

while it took to long foe the next chapter glad to see you continue, i agree the rough sex was disturbing you could adjust that by the concept of absolute power causing absolute depravity and the sons realization and remorse. now that she is determined to maintain her looks its time for her to learn the cause and continue with a loving encounter.

I was thinking about this story recently, wondering what ever happened to the author. I'm happy to see another chapter, and I wish it would have been longer than it was, but I do hope you won't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. It's a nice premise, really. Lots of ways to keep it going. Like, if mom and son wanted to make a ton of money pandering to the fragile egos of women who were both desperate to look younger and with the money to spend on the "miracle lotion". And what might happen when mom gets a dose delivered internally? Would it make the changes last longer, or even permanently?

Hey man, other than a few minor editing issues here and there this story definitely has a lot of great potential. You should look into some more ideas and increase the chapters to 3-4 pages. So many possibilities, mothers friends.....college girls...girl next door. Keep it up, we will be waiting :)

I was not upset with the tying up with rope. She was being uncooperative and she would never reach her current state without it. I am really looking forward to reading your next chapter.

Dilute on skin = younger by years

Concentrated on skin = younger by decades, mind breakingly horny

A tiny bit, taken orally = body of the perfectly sculpted teenager, ecstasy and withdrawal symptoms

A full load taken orally = ?????

I can see him very easily blackmailing/bribing her for 'favours' in exchange for his cum.

Please continue this series!!

I found the rough sex part to be a bit disturbing... I was reading this story for hopefully a loving a relationship, not one where the son suddenly starts smacking his mom around for no apparent reason...

Please continue this series, it's amazing!

Great story! I never leave feedback but with yours I felt I had to. Please continue!!!

Very interested in reading more. I hope you keep writing, you're very talented and write a compelling story. I wonder what she does when she finds out what this special ingredient is.

I wish this story was continued