All Comments on 'Fountain of Youth Ch. 01: Discovery'
by ReliableSources
- 35 Comments
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThanks for posting this tale. A very promising start to what I hope will be a very hot story.
Sex4Lfalmost 11 years agoPlease keep going. It's an interesting concept and sounds like it could be fun to see where the story leads.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI suppose if one were a freshman in high school whose only sexual experiences in life so far involved his ow hand that this "plot" would be amusing...but for a rational adult with actual intercourse (with actual women) under one's belt, its ludicrous nature makes it laughable in a different way.
SomethingInTheWaySheMovesalmost 11 years agoEventually, and especially if Mom's sex-drive increases as she gets "younger", he can let her in on the secret to let her get it straight from the source?
Lots of potential with this storyline. Don't leave us hanging.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIf you have that little of faith in your own story, it you will only continue if people kiss your ass (which IS the gist of your statement), don't bother. Ever.
beguiled999almost 11 years agoIt was a bit short for me, but that's okay. I think the idea has merit and you should run with it and tell your story.
mafia_patriarchalmost 11 years agoI think it has potential too, I've never seen this premise. I also agree with Anonymous, never end a story with that disclaimer. If you think the story is worthwhile, post it and let the chips fall where they may.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThere are not many new ideas in the Inc. genre so when a new concept shows up it is very welcom indeed!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe kid's in the BATHROOM jacking off....NO tissue.....NO towel to catch the "results"
SOOO he unloads in a lotion jar????
I guess it would take to much thought to USE THE TOILET OR THE SINK.
Talk about lame..........
DON'T bother going on with this.......
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoAnd I like some of the comments a lot. The guy who wrote that mom should be getting the magic lotion directly from the source--her boy Jeremy's hot young balls--is on the right track. I stand in awe of the anon who wrote hot hot hot start. This hero started sticking his hard young cock up his mother's mommy-hole when he was 16 and so far he's fucked two babies up his own mother's cunt. Way to go, pal! You know where's the best place to unload your balls and shoot your creamy semen, up the same warm wet twat you came out of. No twat's going to treat your big prick like your own mother's twat, so comfy and cozy and loving. That's a lesson that lots and lots of boys are learning every day as they give the finger to the dumb old taboo and enjoy that magical hole between their own mother's legs. They find that their mommy's cunt fits their cock like a glove fits a hand. Of course it does--it's their own damn birth canal. Up his own mother's cunt is where a boy's cock belongs.
billyjim55almost 11 years agoLiked the idea, but hate these shhort one page starters just to see if someone like it. Write it, post it, they do or they dont, at least it has some meat to it.
Lechemanalmost 11 years agoAn amusing story and definitely new compared to other submissions here. Keep it going.
homerjayalmost 11 years agoi love the idea and trust we'll find out how mother gets the "lotion" directly from it's source. i'm sure it can rejuvenate her inside and outside. :)
enriquemontealmost 11 years agoI like it alot..... have potential.... Please Continue at all COST!!!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoplease continue great idea for a plot line I cant wait to see how it turns out
rancooralmost 11 years agoVery .. interesting idea :))
- So interesting and promising, that you can develop either in intimate relationships son-mother, without prejudice to the general concept of the whole story.
Absolutely worth to continue .. - Get to writing!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI guess everybody wants to hear of that son covering up his mother's face with sticky sperm :3
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoKeep going. I wanna find out how you both will develop... And if she does catch you in the act, how?
Anonymousover 10 years agoThis story has a lot of potential, I'd love to see what you do with it. The fantastic twist of magic is always a cool spicy addition.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI used to use my sisters cream rinse to jack off with in the shower. I started leaving a deposit in the bottle to replace the amount I used.
I probably came in there fifty times before the bottle was used up.
She never said it was different.
Anonymousover 10 years agoYou have 3 detractors and 24 fans. A pretty good ratio for a first story.
The premise is a little whacked out (sorry)....but as many have pointed out, it is a fairly new concept. That is overlooking the known fact that cum is good for a woman's skin.
Tally Ho!!!! get to it.
Thanks Don
Anonymousover 10 years agoI haven't read any of the detractors but this is awesome for a first story so far pretty funny with a buildup of getting hot. I actually find the premise pretty good. It's obviously fantastical but you do a much better job of slowly introducing it. Semen that makes skin younger is way more realistic the way you've written it then some stories where nothing magical happens but somehow the main character's mom just suddenly decides to sleep with him.
