All Comments on 'Four Cousins Play'

If you wanted to write a primarily gay male story, then do so and don't label it as something else. Straight people aren't interested in the heavily gay component you're obviously focusing on...

What happened to the promise that David gave to Cindy? Please stay focused on what you put in the story.

Cindy promised to fuck him as the other reader says. This has potential for at least another chapter.

i like the cousin's interplay - but the sex scenes seemed a little contrived to me.

It had potential but when you said the boy cousin had a 11+ inch dick thats like 0.01% of guys out there. It's not too much of a turn on. If you would of been more realistic for above avg is 7-8 inches it would of been better. I stopped reading once you mention the false size of a cock. I sent your story to 9 other people and they said the same thing. Some read your entire story and the rest did not. You do got potential just be more realistic.