All Comments on 'Four Stops From Home'

fantastic story love it. reading this was like standing there watching this parting part.

the writing was out standing . so i can't wait to read even more of your awesome next story. four stops from home is a winner . there no doubt .

Great first submission and very well written! I love the way you blend the story with the erotica and make it all so sensuous. Even though she was being forced you could feel her emotions going back and forth between fear and desire, well done.

Manfred

Loved this story. Looking forward to more from you.

This is one of the very best stories I have ever read. Really HOT! Please write more.

Starts out promisingly, but veers off all of a sudden into happy-fappy fantasy land with the heroine first startng to enjoy being gang-raped by drunken thugs halfway through the rape's proceedings and then, finally, after every hole's been plugged, being granted the greatest O of her lifetime by the author.

Never read t h a t one before.

–AJ