All Comments on 'Freakiest Friday'

Please continue with this story.

What could be better having your wife/daughter daughter/wife telling you to do it at the same time. But it would be hard to try to keep them straight in your mind. Hope he don't end up getting his daughter/wife preg. But be able to have them both again when they get back in their own bodies.

There has to be another chapter of this one!

who is brandie-need proofreader-so confusing

Ok first let me just say that I liked the idea of the story in itself but you need a proofreader or something the story was started with the daughter being named Mattie then around page two (* chapter 3) you started calling her Brandie. Possible that you had a few names or were working on a couple of ideas and such so if that is the case I would suggest having a note nearby with the names of the characters and their relationships as you work on the story, this is something that I did when writing my short stories in classes awhile back. Also another peeve that got me confused when reading this was the jumping of point of view from Mother to daughter to Husband/father I would suggest keeping that to a chapter or making it clear that the reader is going to start seeing things from another person's POV

That being said liked the story

I'd say more is needed. I hardly even noticed the name changing. Too hard.

It was fun, it was sexy, well written.

I just found you stories and I have to say they are amazing!

Cant wait to read the next one!

Loved the true story of Freaky Friday. More taboo than usual. Using someone else's body.

It was awesome but at the end it feels like ended abruptly, please tell me you will continue this delicious story???

I really enjoyed the story until you talked about the 8yo girl voice turning him on. Really good concept though.

Nice twist on a common theme. You did a pretty good job keeping it from being too confusing, but I think the daughters name changed midway thru. I still enjoyed it, and think I understand the movie Inception now!

I Liked the Idea of Him Fucking His Wife AND Fucking His Daughter in The Same Bed... Like an Incest Orgy...!!! * Awesome...

I won't be labor the name change. I was confused at first by the POV change, and the chapters helped. However, it was too confusing about who was saying what. Especially when all three were together. That being said, I liked the concept and the story; pretty hot. I think an editor might have helped.

Great, once I wrapped my head around it. The ending was too abrupt, though.

This was one of the most satisfying reads here in a long time - you set up a clear narrative, the angle of switching between POVs only added to the immersion of what was going on, and the entire story built perfectly from one stage to the next. I absolutely loved it! <3

what if we added gender change? daughter becomes dad and the 1st thing she would do is check out her new cock and vice versa.

One of the best I've read in a long time.

You make creepy stuff. I read your other work, which was equally creepy a looong time ago.

Not saying its bad. Just not my kind of thing. You write any good ending stuff?

I'd love to read some of your works with a non depressing ending.

Please continue. I hope they don't swap back.

Delightful! 5 stars! Wish daughter would sleep with boyfriend using Mom’s body and get her pregnant!

What an ingenious concept...