All Comments on 'Free Love in a Free Use World'

The story isn't bad. The writing is good quality, but I couldn't get into it. I hate 2nd person stories. *I* am not a girl, so *I* wouldn't be fingering myself through my panties. Reading all of these "you" descriptor pulls me out of your story. I didn't mark you down for my opinion, but I didn't vote it up either.

Does he get her or rather does she get him? I need to know. I love this world, even if it truly is fiction and probably reversed from what will eventually be.

I’m not a huge fan of the second person format, but I love the concept. I’d like to see more, get more exposition on the world and such. This could be really great!

Perfect! I love this theme and i have many texts with free use world.