by jara123
I’m not a huge fan of the second person format, but I love the concept. I’d like to see more, get more exposition on the world and such. This could be really great!
Does he get her or rather does she get him? I need to know. I love this world, even if it truly is fiction and probably reversed from what will eventually be.
The story isn't bad. The writing is good quality, but I couldn't get into it. I hate 2nd person stories. *I* am not a girl, so *I* wouldn't be fingering myself through my panties. Reading all of these "you" descriptor pulls me out of your story. I didn't mark you down for my opinion, but I didn't vote it up either.