All Comments on 'French Kissing with Carl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Horrendous

Way too dramatic. You literally just wrote a very cheap and none too exciting porn piece. No spark or heat, nothing anyone would actually say during or before sex. Maybe try getting some real experience?

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