All Comments on 'Friday Night Changed Everything'

Forgetting the cuck crap, his "small" 5" cock? 5.1" is the average erect cock size, so he may have premature ejaculation problems, but his cock ISN'T small!

Only real brain sick people can write such a crap!!

"Sorry honey, I must have dozed off. Good to hear you will be hoe soon."

And that card game was one of the dullest things I have ever read.

This is Literotica not a forum for fans of Hoyle's Rules of Games.

One of the best Loving Hot Wife stories ever.Thanks.

Please write again and more.

Need to make their way back to the Fetish category; they get better ratings there.

Most people don't browse this category looking for Fetish stories; the ratings reflect that more than it being a good or bad story. So, category placement is key. Or, do authors like the verbal abuse & punishment that most readers of this category will give?

I can't even bare to read most stories; 1st & last couple of paragraphs usually gives a clear indication of the story as a whole, along with reviews can determine if it's readable or garbage.

The author dis a tremendous poor job on this bad story. In fact it seems the author has some serious mental illness mixed with some cuckold issues with gay issues that were transported to this pathetic story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

Sorry, this story is so sad and stupid!

Absolute grade A crap !!

1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Really? One lone wolf thought you were terrific, the rest,not so much. lol

Never, bitch!

There isn't one guy in 10 million that would go along with that. There is 99,999,999 that would kill that motherfucker of a boss, though. On the other hand, you cannot neglect your wife like that stupid bastard did. However, she married him knowing he had a small package, so she also needs her ass kicked.

You told your chosen story your way and except for a few points I guess it was a good humiliation story. It is not one that will gain you a lot of points on this site, however. The first mistake that jumped out at me was switching from 1st person to 3rd person. That really jerks the reader out of the story. Did you have to make the wife such a bitch? Why humiliate hubby, the poor bastard has enough troubles as it is. Like another points out, hubby's dick isn't all that small, except in the heads of so many of us writers who have watched too many porn star freaks.

I gave you a three, even though I didn't care for your story line. Good Luck! cd

"I can see the condensation in his eyes when he tells me. "and don't you worry. I will have Karen in bed early tonight as well." "

Condensation? You mean like what forms on the outside of a cold glass on a hot day? Was the boss crying? I still can't figure out what you were even attempting with that one.

I could ignore one, but this story was so rife with errors that it was difficult to get through it. Please, find a proofreader before you submit your next one.

to Queen Bitch, TK U MLJ LV NV

No man or woman is worth staying with if they are being humiliated and abused . It could make the most sane person snap. She should've been told not to come back to the house and when the boss showed up he should've had something smashed over his smug scumbag head. First she abused him by saying she is going on a date then with someone he knows, than it's his boss than he flaunts her in front of everyone she knows. I'd play along , clean out all the accounts, take money off the house and than proceed in not paying the bills while setting myself up somewhere else so when I serve her divorce papers and quit the job there won't be much for her to go after. Cancel all cards your attached to with her the last minute but in the time your setting up the exit run her cards up . Keep nothing in your name and prepay the apt for a year or two in advance because you'll have no job. The same should go if it's the guy being a dick to his wife

The author, not the characters. I've always wondered what type of person enjoys humiliation and self-deprecation. Gotta suck to be that way.

you don't do that shit to your man and expect to get away with it

Should have been in Fetish.

1*

I think the most interesting detail was the 3 carrot diamond.

BTB

Its very important that they be spelled correctly. Misplaced punctuation and misspellings are stop signs and destroy the flow of reading. Its why editors exist. I have no idea whether or not your tale was worth reading. I quit reading early on.

I tried but between the numerous word errors, grammar errors, and point of view switches, I found the story unreadable.

The author did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some serious mental illness mixed with some cuckold issues and some gay issues were transferred to this ugly story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written, pathetic, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

Not to mention garbage that's been done before. Couldn't finish pg 1

1*

That's all.

These stories need a finish!

need to have some pride. I f they aren't happy w/ what they got , be open about getting divorce, and don't cheat and emasculate.

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What a fucking wimp! He should have changed the locks while the slut was out with the soon to be ex boss and divorced her.

Sorry but if this excites you you are one sick pervert. Marriage should be honorable, if she needs to be fucked by someone else then she needs to leave.

A shame this author stopped writing.

This is a decent story that would be improved greatly with another round or two of serious proofreading. The grammar, spelling, and incorrect word substitutions are distracting at best.

Anyone who likes this garbage has severe brain damage and no self esteem at all.

Not worth scoring, Larry was a pathetic character and his wife was a real piece of work.

And give him some fucking balls

Brain damaged writer(I won't demean the writer by calling themmental midget but this was disgusting in all aspects. Truly pure filth.

DIVORCE THE BITCH AND SUE THE HELL OUT OF THE COMPANY>

The boss IS a bastard. The wife's a slut for dating her husband's boss, knowing how much he hates him. She disrespects hubby in that date & cheating on him, instead of trying to work things out in her marriage sex. The husband is a total wimp not only accepting her date in the end, but also jerking off to his wife being sexually abused by the other men at the club. He's also a wimp for putting up with his boss' behavior. As the commenter wrote below, he should sue the shit out of the company; he should also find another job & then give the notice. As written, this story's disappointing. 2 stars, & I'm being generous. Bob