All Comments on 'Friends...'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too short

It was just getting started and it ended too quick.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What happen

You need to end to story did he cum or what?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Could have been great...

Not nearly enough detail and ended way too soon. Premature ejaculate much?

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
Good start

I enjoyed your story, but you need a chapter 2. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice short story

When guys watch porn together, often more exciting things happen. Usuallt 1 guy takes it out and then others join.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue

Great 1st chapter and something that I've always wanted to do. Pkease continue and tell us what happens next

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