by EroticaDiva123
Are we supposed to get excited by this story of a premeditated rape performed in the most degrading and unempathic way on the lady's wedding night?
What's wrong with you? Consult a shrink, please.
Warning: There are actually human readers here.
You've succeeded!
In confirming all attititudes about Indian males' treatment of women.
Kudos!
This story is so bad, how could even someone make out such things in their mind. Boy you are horrible writer and a pathetic person.
If you are looking for good Indian writers read Mr Who or Touchmate for example.
This fellow is a piece of excrement!
Worst story I've ever read. So many spelling and grammatical mistakes. Errors in plotline and overall a very sick story. Just made me very angry to read a story by a rapist mentality guy.