All Comments on 'Friends First'

Fine realistic story. well done

Love this! Great pace. Please continue!

I do have a quibble, though. You used "common" twice early in the story when you should've used "c'mon." Not a huge deal, but it was distracting.

It was simply adorable. I really enjoyed it. I don't know about the next coming chapter but this story depicted true, pure love.

i could really relate to this story because i had a similar experience with my best friend although nothing ever came of it we are still friends now! this bought back some good memories :)

This is amazing. It feels like you extrapolated from some experience you had, and this is exactly the kind of story I came here for tonight.