All Comments on 'Friends of The Family Ch. 01'

Aaron's introduction to sexual intercourse was very beautifully written. I also liked his openness to Beth's polyamory with her family. I suspect that you'll eventually have him joining in the family's traditions and practices.

However, there were several grammatical errors that should have been corrected before you posted this story. Get yourself an editor and/or some beta readers to help you correct any future errors before you post any more of this story, or other stories. And be sure to thank them publicly between the title and the first word of the story itself.