by ynglady22
I' am just not feeling Ingrid, to me she is a rather weak female leading character because she goes stupid and dumb everytime Blake put his dick in her, to me she just lacks depth and a backbone. Blake is cool but a little to immature for my taste and emotionally unstable i.e. the jealousy issues, however LEO is hottt!!! Can we have more of him or can you give him his own series once this is done? Nice plot line but some of it seems rushed, but other than that it is an interesting story with a nice concept, but Leo to me is the main attraction and it is not even his story.
I do like the story but I kinda wish she would have told Chris to just fuck off and punch him like she did Blake in the bathroom at the party.
Blake and Ingrid are my new favorite couple. Please don't let Chris break them up! 20 more chapters,please!
love your stories and other than the need for grammar/spell check they are enjoyable
I was feeling this story in the beginning but it’s so aggravating when writers portray the leading female character like some simpleton that loses her mind near dick. It’s always the guy that can do whatever and whoever and she right there ready to take second.