All Comments on 'From 4 to 3'

by Merlin76

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pa47epa47eover 12 years ago
well done

ooop's...............shit happens

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i dont get

She rode christian 'to a climax' and they just kept fucking till he was about to have his orgasm. I thought a climax was an orgasm

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You need to go back

to class so you can learn how to write a story. Maybe next year as a freshman in high school.

Merlin76Merlin76over 12 years agoAuthor
And that is why

It's great to have an editor. The line should have read, "Christian to begin his climax." Thank you for catching that :)

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Animals

Animals have more morals than people like this.

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

So glad that this was a lie ..............To be continued...

Hiram325Hiram325about 1 year ago

Thank you for never writing another story.

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