All Comments on 'From a Finger to Fucking Ch. 04'

OK...So they met and had a drink......HOW does this qualify as erotica? This would pass past even the most stringent of censors on a CHILDRENS network on TV and wouldnt even be a 5 minute scene. I hate to say it, but while you are a good writer, your chapters are MUCH too damned short!

There is more to come and I have put two chapters together for the next publishing. I realise that some times I don't write enough at a time and am trying to learn to extend my chapters for the future. But your comments are most welcome thank you

Great so far keep it up

was good but to short