by the_apocalypse
There is more to come and I have put two chapters together for the next publishing. I realise that some times I don't write enough at a time and am trying to learn to extend my chapters for the future. But your comments are most welcome thank you
OK...So they met and had a drink......HOW does this qualify as erotica? This would pass past even the most stringent of censors on a CHILDRENS network on TV and wouldnt even be a 5 minute scene. I hate to say it, but while you are a good writer, your chapters are MUCH too damned short!