All Comments on 'From GF to Mistress'

It's very nice to see that Sharon made Kevin such a good little boy for her. Fantastic story. I enjoyed it very much. x

I liked the story, but find some different transition worlds. It reads like a list of chores. She did this then she did that, then she did the other, then she did something else. It just takes away from the enjoyment of the story

Simple. Fresh. {'Cute'.}

Ideal.

Quelticy Quelticy Quelticy!

There may be more, but what's to say?

Quelticy Quelticy Quelticy!

Sounds like she did a pretty good job finding and transitioning her new bf into her wonton willing slut for pleasure. Encore, encore. 3 stars

But a bit too fast...still a 5

A story with a "Happy Ever After" ending. My penchant for submission is my small penis, certainly in part. Who knows why some guys want to be treated this way? Loved your story except for the GS.

I hope there is more to cum, at least for her.

Good story. I'd have made him more reluctant but very enjoyable all the same.

This was a decent, quick story. It has even more potential though if you took just a little more time with each part.

I don’t know if Little Kevin is still on this site but I’ll write this comment as if he is and hopefully he’ll think it’s a helpful comment and carry on writing as I wouldn’t want to discourage anyone.

I don’t like to write bad reviews of people’s stories particularly when they are new because I know how it felt myself with the comments on my first couple of stories. But it’s obvious that this writer has no experience, particularly of the pegging, of what he’s writing about.

He’s also condensed what is a good idea for a 6000 word story into a bad story of about 600 words. I would suggest that he reads a few stories, or maybe more than a few, by the many good writers on this site and then rewrite the story as it should be written.

No doubt it is very enjoyable story...