All Comments on 'From Jenny to Mei Ch. 02'

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ohdownunderohdownunderalmost 10 years ago
whow

if only i could have the power of a hot lil slut like that

SybawriteSybawritealmost 10 years ago
Strong

Very good second chapter. I like where this is going. Jenny has something coming for her and doesn't know how to deal with it but Phil is going to make a real woman out of her!

Rawmaster60Rawmaster60almost 10 years ago
Crunch

5 stars for exploring this girl and letting her learn her place. Loving this and wanting much more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
She's got it coming

You've built this character as a real bitch... she's going to enjoy what she's got comming.

VanessaNelsonVanessaNelsonover 9 years ago
I'm hooked.

I hate that I am loving this story, does that make sense? :)

I am continuing on with this story because I am totally hooked!!

virtual_lovervirtual_loverover 9 years ago
Talent

asianToy, you have a great talent.Thanks for sharing it with us.

liz33ndliz33ndover 7 years ago
when in rome

master and slave is very erotic

Rapier875Rapier875about 1 year ago

Nope sorry, 2 chapters read and I don't like it ............

zammzamm3 months ago

Fascinating. I certainly didn't see this coming. OK, I'll keep going to the next part

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I've hit the mother of all writer's blocks. Not that I don't write, I do, maybe too much. The issue is that I get to a point in a story and can't find the motivation to work through the issues. The harder I work and the more I press myself the more my passion is sapped and ...

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