All Comments on 'From Roommates to Lovers'

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BrendaNWBrendaNWover 8 years ago
wonderful

love to be Brenda for my roommate... more please, you are a good writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Take my seed!

Make me a plant! Awful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Requires a special commentary!

I'm going to CUM!

Take my SEED!

This story ain't fit for CHICKEN FEED!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brenda or John!

I don't care which of them I am - I just want to be one of them! You have a solid start here and a part 2 (at least) would be good to see how far you can push the characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
very provocative

Love to have a CD friend. Really nice writing. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WTF

"'Please don't do this.' But I was too turned on and pushed my cock in."

So Brenda got raped?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

more please dont stop at this write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting read but...

What happened to the pizza?

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