All Comments on 'From Sister to Whore Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
From sister to whore ch. 2

Although I thought this story was HOTT it ended too soon. I was left hard with nowhere to take it. Please either get to the point or make other submissions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
sick

sick story if he loves her there is no way he would force her into having sex with others especially gangbangs that is gross it just shows how little he loves her it wouldn't have been so bad if he had atleast talked it over with her first and gave her time to think about it instead of just bringing home a bunch of assholes to fuck her weather she liked it or not no love there at all just a sick story from a sick writer this story belongs in group sex or nonconsensual sex aeras

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Sucks just like the first one did... damnit stop writting... i geuss you're a virgin? Thought so.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
interesting

it has the possibility to become good but work on putting more story next time I'm pretty sure any women would have killed him had they done what he did but other then that good story possibility @_@.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Shit

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 10 years ago
It was IOK until he brought the two men home.

I stopped reading right there. I hope that he gets his. Not my style. I am for most incest and perversion but a low class bastard who would sell his sister of mother to other men is beneath contempt, IMO.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Story ruined

As soon as you invited the other two guys, you lost me as a reader

Vedaire69Vedaire69over 3 years ago

well it was a great story up until he decided he had to get other guys involved what is wrong with you story writters these days sheesh gotta make everyone out to be sluts or tramps god cant you just keep it to 2 people who not necc love each other but only wanna be with one person

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well it was too short, but agree with many of the others you went brain dead allowing others to participate, hopefully you gain some maturity over the years......... probably not though seems like of you writers are beyond maturing any with age. What kind of brother are? like your story? Hope not............. Hard to give you much credit for the opportunity to make positive change though.........

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