All Comments on 'From Snob to Lesbian Bimbo'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great Tale

Very entertaining and well detailed.

Every bullied, victimised, attacked and harassed person needs a copy of that book on witchcraft and the ability to use it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Turning your sister into a bimbo won't solve you problems. I'm interested in how everyone who knew her reacted?

vastenvastenalmost 10 years ago
interesting but my opinion

The story started good then seemed rushed then jumping ahead 6 months I think that turning her into an incestous lesbian bimbo doesn't exactly get revenge not as much of had the spell left her inner monologue in tact where she could still rationalize everything her thoughts feelings etc but not express them. Especially when Her sister is making her a leabian or having her perform humiliating tasks for her sisters enjoyment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A good start

I enjoyed your story & can't wait for the next chapter! I might suggest adding some more piercings to the new bimbo !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

don't waste your time writing more. Story is stupid and not very entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I am a fan of yours as I read ALL of your work I do prefer your series however this is one is very well done as well :) LOOVE your stuff!

Heels LoverHeels Loveralmost 10 years ago
Sexy Premise

I very much liked the story and the ideas behind it. I'm looking forward to the next installment - - Please give us more descriptions of the sexy, slutty outfits Kendra loves to wear (stilettos, stockings, lingerie, tight sexy skirts), and it might be fun to see Stacy 'transformed' by all of this... becoming deeply aroused by her now-sexy sister, and craving the same sexiness for herself that Kendra now has. Could be fun!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
very nice

If I had been carol I would have secretly done the same thing with some hair from Stacy after she left. That way I would have had my personal lesbian twins.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Is there more coming soon?

Dying to know...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good Story

Dont listen to the negative comments. This a good story and we can't wait to read more!

graymangazergraymangazerabout 8 years ago
Nice

I liked it, but I would have preferred to see Kendra keep her own personality, but locked inside the mind of a controlled bimbo. Sweet anguish :))

Also I agree with another comment: Carol could also bring Stacy under her control and have a pair of lesbian bimbos.

It was a little rushed toward the end and the transformation and training over much too quickly.

But you have some very erotic ideas so keep going, and please use an editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lost it towards the end, didn't you...

The punctuation went missing a bit - maybe you were typing with just one hand by that point?

The story was lame; sorry, but it was. The sort of fantasy males have about lesbians, despite the fact that there were no lesbians in the story (implied, maybe, like the incest).

If you want to be inspired to write then may I suggest you have a look at other stories in your chosen genres on this site - a clue to how good they are is their score.

Again, sorry; I am not trying to drag you down but this story was not what I was given the impression it was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
where is part 2

part one was great now do a part two please

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

FROM SNOB TO LESBIAN BIMBO part 2 and ending coming

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Love this story! Please continue it!!!

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