by wyo66
Very entertaining and well detailed.
Every bullied, victimised, attacked and harassed person needs a copy of that book on witchcraft and the ability to use it.
Turning your sister into a bimbo won't solve you problems. I'm interested in how everyone who knew her reacted?
The story started good then seemed rushed then jumping ahead 6 months I think that turning her into an incestous lesbian bimbo doesn't exactly get revenge not as much of had the spell left her inner monologue in tact where she could still rationalize everything her thoughts feelings etc but not express them. Especially when Her sister is making her a leabian or having her perform humiliating tasks for her sisters enjoyment
I enjoyed your story & can't wait for the next chapter! I might suggest adding some more piercings to the new bimbo !
don't waste your time writing more. Story is stupid and not very entertaining.
I am a fan of yours as I read ALL of your work I do prefer your series however this is one is very well done as well :) LOOVE your stuff!
I very much liked the story and the ideas behind it. I'm looking forward to the next installment - - Please give us more descriptions of the sexy, slutty outfits Kendra loves to wear (stilettos, stockings, lingerie, tight sexy skirts), and it might be fun to see Stacy 'transformed' by all of this... becoming deeply aroused by her now-sexy sister, and craving the same sexiness for herself that Kendra now has. Could be fun!
If I had been carol I would have secretly done the same thing with some hair from Stacy after she left. That way I would have had my personal lesbian twins.
Dont listen to the negative comments. This a good story and we can't wait to read more!
I liked it, but I would have preferred to see Kendra keep her own personality, but locked inside the mind of a controlled bimbo. Sweet anguish :))
Also I agree with another comment: Carol could also bring Stacy under her control and have a pair of lesbian bimbos.
It was a little rushed toward the end and the transformation and training over much too quickly.
But you have some very erotic ideas so keep going, and please use an editor
The punctuation went missing a bit - maybe you were typing with just one hand by that point?
The story was lame; sorry, but it was. The sort of fantasy males have about lesbians, despite the fact that there were no lesbians in the story (implied, maybe, like the incest).
If you want to be inspired to write then may I suggest you have a look at other stories in your chosen genres on this site - a clue to how good they are is their score.
Again, sorry; I am not trying to drag you down but this story was not what I was given the impression it was.