All Comments on 'From The Couch to the Kitchen'

Fuck!!! You get me so hot, I love your style, your storytelling is so imaginable, so erotic. Keep it and me cumming.

Usually I am annoyed by the grammar police but in your story it really took away from the story and the errors were so obvious too. For instance his cock is so hard it was touching his chest. First I have seen those videos of guys with monster cocks and even theirs do not touch their chest so I take it you mean stomach. Then constant misuse of words which the first one that stuck out to me was...stock in my mouth. The correct word is stuck in my mouth.

It's really a shame for the story itself is hot but errors take away from it. In short could have been 4stars but this one as is 2stars.

if you gotta include THE WIFE \ BIOLOGICAL MOTHER thennnnnnnnnnnnn -

please don't include her just yet ........ there's countless other ideas before that

door should get opened ({( EXAMPLE )}) [ From The Couch To The Bedroom

" stepdaughter , stepfather now fuck each other " ] ... here's my version of

main plot being extremely quick terms - the daughter actually gives her mother

sleeping pills which the mother goes bed lots earlier normal ... her stepfather

some point does return going bed when he's ready sleep ... the daughter

sneaks inside the bedroom starts doing seductive things the stepfather

he wakes after something extremely erotic not able fathom what the stepdaughter

actually doing ... things go from there they fuck right there MEANWHILE

the mother \ the wife completely asleep right there next them

the only real complaint i'll give - make the chapters that's this franchise

being lots longer than what you've actually done

the husband\the boyfriend ..... you've actually did everything this good

EVEN THOUGH he was never actually given name ............... hahahahahahahahaha

chapter3 ............ now that I've placed more thought ...... better title than what

I've given ( if you've not done new story ) - from the kitchen to the bedroom

` OR ` from the couch to the kitchen now to the bedroom ` OR ` from the

kitchen to mom's bedroom

what's going on with the#3rdstorywith the series ....... it's getting the point

where i'm gonna need read others over again

That was Hott, I do hope you write more