All Comments on 'From Wimp To Pimp'

Great story. It was an incredibly unique story that flowed well together. I hope for more stories of this calibre

BRAVO!

One of the best stories I've read this year. I hope you consider making a second chapter. Also i think that you should turn this into an audio story I'm sure the voice talents of Literoticas audio group would love a wonderful sexy story like this to play out.

Again what a awesome story.

Thank you for it.

Great story just loved the build up and story line.

Please tell me this isn't the end! You should totally make another chapter maybe the dark lord takes an interest in kael and wants to use his power to win the war against heaven, or one of Shay's old allies takes a interest in Karl and kidnaps him putting him under mind control causing shay and the others to save him.

This is one of the best stories if not the best I've read on here.

I must say I love the build up, I actually thought the story was about to end at one point and then you brought in an angel. - awesome.

I hope you're considering making another chapter, since the story is this great. It kept my attention through the hole story which I read without taking pauses (which rarely happens for me). Anyway you did an awesome job and I'm looking forward to read more of your stories

They are right great story I hope to read more of this here hero and rock star tell then I will find another one of your to read

This writer is excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ha playing the Wintendo Nii U they should of got the Wintendo Nitch with the best games winds of the lands and mega luwigy journey

Dude ...... Standing ovation , with a golf clap . A first rate , fucking masterpiece . Take a bow.

Bravo great story excellent adventure! Creative, imaginative, and unique! 5 stars

Amazing story! Definitely one of my top favourite literotica fantasy stories ever.

I don't understand how people can eat/lick shit, much less enjoy it though. It's disgusting.