All Comments on 'Fuck Pet (short)'

Not my thing, but we'll written. Will you continue? Will we get any back story? Is this permanent or temporary (how long)?

Stories were a sub travels to meet her new master/owner(s) are a dozen a dime. This only stands out positively in editing and nicely fluent tale, but falls short on other aspects, e.g. thin plot, empty characters and no relationship dynamics at all. Continue writing and hopefully soon will become a great writer in all dimensions.

Best wishes, Simon