All Comments on 'Fuck, This Girl... Ch. 04'

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juicycarameljuicycaramelover 12 years ago
FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!

fuck this man lol

girlthat392girlthat392over 12 years ago
DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY!

Go Ellie get your fuck on with sexy Marcus!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

Five.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
Sometimes

we find love in the weirdest places with the most unlikely people. Good for them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Oh god

Og god this was just so damn lustful. Fuck, this story...

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 9 years ago
Thanks for the 2 pages!

He's falling for Ellie? Love reading that, because he's not a jerk!

I loved the switch to Ellie's point of view. I specifically enjoyed her sarcastic reply/thought here:

"Hi, Ellie. Ready to bring that mark up?" he asked. Oh I'll bring something up alright, won't be my mark...

Keep up the great work! It's hot and you added details to him cumming. Great! I'm hooked.

6King6King7 months ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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