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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A first effort?

Not a bad storyline but it needed padding out...more detail...it was not much different to reading the tags

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Written by someone who has no idea what he is doing.

Really poor work. You'll need much more if you want to achieve even a decent erotic story worth reading.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice one

Beautiful way to lose your V-card

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