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by callmecurious2

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tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
A VERY DYSFUNCTIONAL COMPANIONSHIP

a true taker and an EZer giver, TK U MLJ LV NV

Northpacific2017Northpacific2017over 6 years ago

You might want to read a couple of Harlequin novels if you wish to continue, as been separated too long, it is a start, could use a lot more character development,attention to the details, as it is said devil is in the details.

North

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I liked it 5 stars

BUT it needs more chapters or at least one to become a Romance. Great start.

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