All Comments on 'Fucking Christal Ch. 01'

I hope he get's her in the next chapter. After teasing him like that, she needs to be taught a lesson or two.

Stories from an obsessor's POV are hot. You did a great job of describing Cristal. I could picture in my mind every bit of her sultriness. Maybe a little "mind control" or other device would work in subsequent chapters instead of the ol' "I'm horny and I've always loved you! bullshit. Give the pursuit some edge. Her teasing is delectable suspense.