All Comments on 'Fucking like Pharaohs'

Funny and hot... nice job....

funny but longer is better.

There's absolutely no storyline here and Dave needs a few lessons in editing. The first 'program' should be 'programme' and only proper nouns like 'Dave' start with a capital. Family titles such as mum, dad, sister, grandad are not proper nouns.

the ending its like real mom son, not like some story here where the son become a lover sometime the mother become sub. that is not like mom son. in this story i like the last line. its like "i am still ur mother". good job

Talk about a quicky, great job, you really know how to do your thing!!keep them quickies!

10 inches. really !!

I wrote this specifically for a reader named Terry who asked me write a 'Wham Bang Thank you Ma'am' without the name 'Terry' appearing.

Let's see what's happened so far:

37000 people have read a submission described as 'A Mother / Son quickie:

19 Favourite stories.

As many favourites in other stories on the back of reading this one,

4 Favourite authors as a result (but maybe not directly) of this story.

Public comments:

3 Positive comments,

2 Complaining it's too short (It's in the description!)

2 Fairly neutral comments (yes why not 10 inches).

Privately:

Terry seems to be drooling,

Another Terry has made positive comments and thanked me for not using his name,

Another Terry who likes to imagine being the man in my stories has complained I have not used his name and cannot make himself the subject,

2 more positive comments from readers who tell me to ignore the Anonymous critique.

Enjoyed the story, but did the big dick son create the perfect offspring, finish the story with a knocked up mother, she has to have another shot with her son, keep writing !!

that's just a reflection of real life. In plenty of families the sexual tension between a mother and her male child is bubbling underneath the surface. A mother is smitten by her big strapping boy and especially by what the boy's got jumping around in his pants. Her son loves everything about his full-figured voluptuous mom, and he's drawn, consciously or more often unconsciously, to the hairy hole between her thighs, the same wondrous hole he came out of as a tiny baby. Sooner or later something snaps, and the boy's got to try out his own mother's cunt for himself he's just got to. Just like mom's driven to spread her legs for her kid's powerful prick and for the huge doses of semen he's got in his hot young balls. How often does it happen? We'll never know. But when it does it's awesome.

You might want to think of asking someone other than "Dave" for editing. This is not well-written. Half the story consists of the words, "See me naked." And the ten inch dick? Of course it is.

Now that is a REAL quicky. Did leave me "hanging"

I do enjoy your stories though.

The story wasnt bad but the comments were even better.

Very short read, not much to say.