by leekeyone
It's a great day-- LeekyOne's finally posted a new story. Loved this one too, tho I would have liked more B/G piss action (why not have her piss, uncontrollably, on the floor as she's coming while being fucked up the ass? That would be HOT!!). Teeny-tiny request: Watch those typos. They distract me just a bit as I'm reading-- yeah, yeah, picky, I know, but they make me realize that I'm sitting in a front of a computer jerking off to someone else's fantasy instead of living out the reality myself (would it were true...!!). Anyway, I look forward rather intensely to your next chapter, LO. Keep it up, and keep keeping me up (so to speak).
I will not lie. i thoroughly enjoyed both chapters and await more. you must have done some other bits of writing before because this was very well written. i wont lie and say it was perfect, but there was only a slight distance from it.
been waiting a long time for more chapters in this super sexy saga.