by fms9612
Writing is pretty good. The story has lost some focus and it might be in the wrong catagory. Otherwise keep writing.
Nothing clever or original in this mess. It's neither erotic or sexy and is going downhill fast. The writing is mediocre at best.
we'll stop writing asshole of LIT when your sorry ass stops commenting! You are a old fat ugly fat fag whose wife fucked you over from day one,. Annoy the king of the cucks
I'll admit. When I was young I had a thing for fucking rock stars. My boyfriend worked for a concert promoter and we were at every show. Now he had to spend his time running the sound board while I got to prance around backstage. On many occasions my boyfriends was the second...or third....or fifth cock in me after a show. Something about rock stars just made me turn into a slut. I still have great memories as I listen to many of these bands today.
I think it could be a nice love triangle based on tenderness and you don't need to call yourself a slut cause of it.