All Comments on 'Fucking the Rock Star Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Feedback

Writing is pretty good. The story has lost some focus and it might be in the wrong catagory. Otherwise keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Stop writing now

Nothing clever or original in this mess. It's neither erotic or sexy and is going downhill fast. The writing is mediocre at best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5

we'll stop writing asshole of LIT when your sorry ass stops commenting! You are a old fat ugly fat fag whose wife fucked you over from day one,. Annoy the king of the cucks

Mara_DMara_Dabout 7 years ago
Love

I think this story line is great please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Brings back memories

I'll admit. When I was young I had a thing for fucking rock stars. My boyfriend worked for a concert promoter and we were at every show. Now he had to spend his time running the sound board while I got to prance around backstage. On many occasions my boyfriends was the second...or third....or fifth cock in me after a show. Something about rock stars just made me turn into a slut. I still have great memories as I listen to many of these bands today.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Yowza!.

epic beyond fucking thunderdome.

A fuckingA!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think it could be a nice love triangle based on tenderness and you don't need to call yourself a slut cause of it.

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