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"Noooooo!" she screamed to no one in particular as she saw the WHORE tat on her back.
"Moke? Are you OK in there?" Mokie froze in her tracks. It was Panda. She knew it.
"Panda? How did you get in here?" she asked through the closed door.
"Your roommate, Jenn, let me in. What a nice girl!" said Panda. "I just didn't want to wake you, so I was hanging out in the kitchen until you go up. Your intercom has been buzzing like crazy."
"Uhhhhh....." Mokie started, not knowing how to finish. "OK, one sec, Panda."
Her mom started calling again, adding to her anxiety, and sweat started gushing down her face. She picked up the phone as she rummaged through her jewelry box.
"Hi, mom, just a second," she answered.
"Honey, just let me up. You can finish getting ready once I am inside."
Mokie found a wide, tight-fitting bracelet and clasped it around her wrist with the J&J tattoo, blocking it from sight. "It's OK, mom. I am ready."
She hung up and checked herself in the mirror one last time before greeting her cousin. Half of her wanted to reveal everything to her mother, to give up the whole arrangement and admit that she needed to take another semester of school.
The other half of her, however, thought it best to keep quiet and act out the rest of Jason's demented vision, whatever that was. She did not want to dump any of what had happened this week on her mother. She could imagine her mom crying non-stop for days at the thoughts of everything she had been through. She decided it would be best for her mom to never find out that she had the words "Slut" and "Whore" tattooed on her body.
Not knowing which half of her mind she would obey, she stepped out of her room and rushed by Panda to answer the buzz and let her mom in the building.
"Panda!" she screamed in manufactured elation as she turned and hugged her cousin hello.
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Dear Readers,
Thank you for all the positive feedback and high ratings thus far. This concludes part one of this series. If you have any requests for where this story goes from here, please comment or send me a message.
Thank you,
Abob1
- COMMENTS
Perfectflattopover 6 years agoHo about some real tattooing ? Get a master tattooist at work on her and let her get great muti colored tattoos. Let her arms advertise her sluttines with full sleeves ! What is cute too, is a nicely colored tattoo on her face somewhere. So that everybody can see it for the rest of her life !
There is so much you can do yet to her !
jleetechieover 11 years agoInteresting to read people's thoughts. I am leaning towards a twist in the plot that her vulnerable/enslaved/subjugated, but yet exacts some revenge on J and J. There is this character, the one that pops up every few chapters, who first appeared in Chapter One at the cafe. I wonder if he will become a main player. Glad I am not trying to write the next section! Great job!
Anonymousover 11 years agothis is one of the few truly non-consensual stories I've read. It's believable and I, personally, feel you got a very good thing going. I'd find it very improbable the cavalry suddenly arrived and made it all better. It's only in Disney stories there has to be a happy ending. i would much rather see how you intend to take it further, thus far you've done an absolutely fantastic job, you're an awesome writer.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoOnce you get too much into the tatts and permanent marks etc, it might as well be a scar. It's nice when there is really nothing permanent about the treatment because now she pretty much needs to get revenge and serious revenge on jason and jenn and even the other characters.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt's nice that J&J are leaving Mokie alone until Panda leaves. Not sure if I want a revenge story for part 2. Although I guess Jenn's involvement is for her own revenge. I love it so far. I also like that you write quickly and the chapters kept coming.
