All Comments on 'Fun in South Africa'

Quality writing with plenty of heat. I look forward to much more about Rob and Nancy!

...I suppose that it's his curse ... only has a 7" dick. I guess that also means that every other man in the world will have a larger one by several inches so he can satisfy Rob's wife where Rob cannot. I don't know about anyone else, but don't you tire of "the other man" always having a bigger package to offer? It becomes so trite and so meaningless, after you've read the multitude of stories that believe it is of utmost importance, that it almost provokes laughter. How about a little creativity in that department ... that is, unless you suffer from penile envy. Then it's a given that you must vent your frustrations through exaggerated prose.

In the first one she was cheating with Jen before she brought him in. Here, her focus is he should watch. So she gets to have fun but he gets nothing the first night.

Then she denies him anal before they go back to the couple. And she gives it away to the other guy in a session where she gets most of the attention. He, on the other hand, spends most of time on the woman and gets a quick fuck.

Now the wife wants separate time away with her.

We also get her thoughts about how wonderful it is and how much she wants to do everything but he is limited to unemotional responses, either yes or echoing whatever she says she wants. "Do you want to watch him with me?" "I want to watch him with you." It has the feel that she is getting everything she wants and he is settling for what he can get. She seems to be paying lip service to how this is going to make everything wonderful for them, but it feels like it is just making it wonderful for her.

It's funniest in stories where the woman seems to be taken by a guy's looks and finds herself involved and all the emotion and fears and danger is expressed. And, suddenly, at the end, she mentions her husband's little dick. It's almost like the authors think it is a mandatory mantra, like, "God bless America," at the end of every political speech.

There is another amusing "requirement" in many stories. The husband is sharing and he notices the other guy is a inch longer, but he is thicker, or vice versa. It's like the authors think that in that kind of story an essential element is that penis displacement volume must be equal.

Very well written and erotic. The detail and buildup were very well done. But why do male writers always tell this story from the woman's head? How much more interesting and unique to tell from the man's emotional perspective. This is more subtely done than most, but we are still left with a clueless cuckold and a selfish cheating wife.

until the lesbian theme took hold. Why do authors write such great theme stories only to get off track and ruin the story

South Africa where animals habe.more morals than the human garbage.