All Comments on 'Futanari Breeding Agency'

Very hot story well written

Really enjoyed it and I'm hoping that there is more to follow

Really a wonderful story line, so many women, so little time! (side note: spell check/editor) :-)

Aside from the spelling and syntax errors, it was a good story. I’d love to read more...

This needs to be a series.

This should be made into a series. I would love to read more.

please add more to this

JUST OUT FUCKING STANDING!!!!!

Nice story. Are you going to make it into a series?

Like the other guy said, this needs to be a multi part series because I'm incredibly interested in how the other milfs would react to this, and what about her managers wanting to jump and that action.

I feel like my life will not be complete without a long series (or even multiple) in the world you have built around your characters. I hope you continue to write more. Thank you for your contribution to erotic literature.

I too hope you continue this as a series.

Seeing a lot of red-H's in your future. This is super hot!

Loved it, can't wait to read more about her going back to the agency and of other women she chooses. Possibly the other Futa's due to jealousy. Really good job here.

I loved it! It cant be the end I need more!

Absolutely brilliant writing, the story was very enticing as well. Keep up the good work ;-)

Very hot, please keep it going

Want that Girly-dick in Myanmar assortiment..... 😈😎

i wish i was rose taking her cock in my ass and mouth

You can't stop with just 1 chapter !!

Boy if you don't continue this storyline I'll be very disappointed

Definitely looking forward to the sequel!

This is one of the best futanari stories that I've ever read. I think the fact that Alina and Rose wouldn't let Henry join was very sexy. Well done!

Prequel, sequel ... we (I) need these. Thankyou.

Please please continue this story it is the best futa story I have ever read!

HOLY SHIT!! This is by far one of the greatest stories ever, really hope for a sequel.

The first page had me enthralled. Everything after her time with Evelyn was comparatively less engaging though (to me). You have a great premise and world here. I hope you do more with it.

Yeah I got something to say, write more this! Seriously, this is fantastic and if I have any complaint about your works it’s that the endings leave me wanting more. Seriously, this is great and deserves its own series.

would love more of this please!!

Made an account on this site, just so that I could Fav this story!

Yeah I would love to see more of this with Alina being very dominant and also with some younger girls. Please continue.

Great story, looking forward to part 2.

When is part 2 coming??

Hot stuff! Maybe some of these wimpy husbands can get in on the butt sex?

amazing

It's the second time I re-read it from the beginning and it's still so effective. You have a way of writing your sex scenes and all their little details so clearly and perfectly paced.

That was,so erotic & exciting. Though, I love idea of the husband being invited in to clean up all that cum with his tongue & eating his wife to another orgasm, but that is just me. You write what your imagination inspires. I know I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us.

what a fantastic story idea. Your descriptions and imagery are so strong and vivid that I felt it all, and Alina talking about breeding Rose's friends and daughter made my clit jump.

Fantastic. Loved it all. The slow rise to dominance, the realisation of submission... A great read.

Liked it very much, but would like to see a description of her sperm filling the womb of the women she is fucking

Yes, I agree. A well-written, charged erotic story like this i great to read.

The only thing I would have liked, only because it's a 'thing' is some numbers. Exactly how big is Alina. And you had the perfect opportunity in the measurement scene. I'm surprised it wasn't there.

But you're the writer, so it's your right to have the scene play out as you wish. :-)

Definitely one of the more creative futa series I've indulged in ! Honestly this is entertainingly as good as Julie Law ! From Amazon !

Started out well, ended fuckin' terribly. She's asked to be professional and the first thing she does is disrespect her client? Bruhhhh that literally makes no sense. She went from being naive and self conscious to cuckolding a happily married couple overnight? Waaaack

Always start out being nice and end being a bully

So very sensual, there is scope for a lot more episodes, with Mother & Daughter, Plus the 2 at the Clinic, a Gang Bang between the 5 Ladies

Great plot, terrific characters, sensual and erotic, all without being just vulgar words. The writing is excellent.

Mistress Alina deserves to have her story continue.

It should progress though, not just be six clients each with the same details.

As Alina gains experience, and as her body is conditioned, her skills, strength, and stamina will naturally increase just from the sex. Do this gradually enough and you can create six different chapters without total repetition. Her beauty could slowly increase too.

You could do offshoot episodes where she meets women or couples in fitness clubs, swimming in the wilderness, art galleries, etc.

Ration out the changes and improvements in her, and you could have a mini-series of novellas if you wanted.

But the main thing, my main point, Sonatarte, is that you are very very good at writing and you should keep writing, keep working on your craft. You are really excellent at this.

I had a hard on for all of the story if she was real I would hire her just for the anal experience

Started well, apart from the excessive use of trailing adjectives (“she laughed, loudly”), then went down the drain for me with Alina having a complete change of character, and the women she fucked turning into sex zombies.

I agree with the last Anonymous. I lost interest not even halfway through page three of four. The story doesn't bring anything new to well-trod territory. The whole making moms-to-be sex slaves who humiliate the dads-to-be goes against the whole premise of trying to bring children into happy, healthy households. It just doesn't make sense with the setup of the story, and the sudden change to Alina's entire persona doesn't feel natural. It's very disappointing. I'm passing on continuing the series.

I'm loving it so far. Well written.

This was a great first chapter. I will look forward to reading the others!