All Comments on 'Futanari Club'

more please

I thought that Lisa was a bit naive but I guess that really adds to the story somewhat. I am happy that you left it open for additional chapters and look forward to your next installment. You probably should have gotten an editor to look at it because they would have caught your misspelling and misuse of grammar. I didn't think it was bad enough to deduct points though and definitely gave you a 5 for the story.

would be much better if you found some to proof read it, i look forward to reading more.

Is Lisa going to become the new Queen because her Penis is so much bigger than the current Queen?

not a bad story

i loved the concept, a whole club full of women and futanari, though i could do with some more futa, maybe even futa/futa action, that'd be awesome

though either it was me, but i found it was a little chaotic written, not counting the occasional small mistake. May i suggest reading the story over a few times? preferably a few days after writing a part. or at least an editor, they are a huge help

thatlonewolf (not logged in soz)

Great story. Some futa on futa would be nice, sex with stockings on or in ripped pantyhose would be great. Sex THROUGH pantyhose (even just masturbation or a blowjob) would be AWESOME!

Damn love the story, i love futa teen fucking MILF, keep 'em cummin. Please no futa-futa.

Can't wait to read more

I love your writing style, you have a way of letting us reading this story feel the complete story-line. I am impressed and turned on. thank you land keep writing.

Horrid writing. All the kind of garbage onecwould expext from a straight guy who jas bever even met a transvestitie.

Good storyline, and great storytelling. I agree with suggestions about an editor, and also that it wasn't too distracting. I hope you keep writing.

I found it verrrry amusing that the anonymous 1/20/18 commenter used misspelling to complain about your writing -hilarious.

Spelling errors aside, the only complaint I have is you mention in the Forward that this Universe only has Women and Futanari, with no Men?

If that's the case, then when People have Children, does that mean that the Futanari are the "Father's"?

Also during Lisa's examination by Maria, they both mention "boys"?

Love your style. Big fan. Keep up the great work.

OOOHHHhh I loved this story. I hope part 2 is about Maria ,Jenn, and Lisa second go round. I would really love Jenn getting fucked in the ass. Maybe as Maria licks Lisa's pussy.. Pleas keep writing. The mistakes are ok, but maybe proof read it before you send it. Thanks